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Frolaytia Capistrano v1 by Blue-senpai Frolaytia Capistrano v1 by Blue-senpai
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Beautifully drawn and well done. It is excellent in the form of aesthetic art since it is quite pleasing to see, but it does have problems with it that I can somewhat see.

Vision: The vision of a pin-up girl in Christmas day is planned out greatly. I appreciate the thought and hard work placed into this. The theme goes well with the Christmas Pin-Up girl too, for she also seemed like a gift wrapped in red and unwrapped for the audience to see and perhaps take in that beauty for themselves.

Originality: Originality leaves a lot to be desired. The style... I just want you to dump it out. I see this style in every generic anime. The best example of her eyes I can see it being an inspiration from Bleach and some others and other high school anime. If you want to go through anime style route, please, do it in your own style rather copying from a generic anime style because I can't see your mark in this and it is disappointing.

Technique: It's executed well, with the coloring, the shadows, the highlights, the line art, it's all well done. I can see it being like this if I take a look at her like that. However, I am a little iffy about the foreshortening in general. I know some foreshortening, but the foot looks a little wrong to me. That's just mostly what is bothering me. Other than that, good job on the technique.

Impact: Did it leave a lasting impression on me or did it have any meaning at all? No. It's... forgettable to be honest. There's just so many of these types of anime styles, drawings, coloring, and everything else in this picture that are just so similar with the other anime styled digital drawings and coloring. In fact, I closed this immediately when I saw it but then I hesitated when you said you wanted a critique so I gave you my honest and somewhat brutal critique. So yeah, even you put this out there, it would just get lost within the void of other anime drawings similar to this. It needs to badly stand out, and I just can't see it happening with this. It doesn't pop out to me. So I give the impact a 1/5.

This is my honest yet brutal critique. I am not trying to push you down, but I am giving my honest thoughts on it, with the hopes you would get better from it. Sorry, that's just how I feel as a fellow artist.

The vision and technique, you've done it beautifully and well done. But for originality and impact, it's lacking for the lack of a better term.

Overall, still a good drawing. I enjoyed it as a fanservice kind of thing, but overall, I would just forget about it in the next few seconds and minutes. So yeah.
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snakehead333 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2017
God Frolaytia is awesome. Love her and this pic is sexy as hell.
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you Jacob :>
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snakehead333 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2017
you're welcome
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:iconemotionalchild:
Emotionalchild Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm speechless! Blush-Small  
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks owo 
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:iconemotionalchild:
Emotionalchild Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem Blush-Small 
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:iconespada9000:
espada9000 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017  Student Digital Artist
This definitely deserve to be featured in the Heavy Object group.
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
There is a Heavy Object group here on deviantart? D:
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:iconespada9000:
espada9000 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Yup i'll invite you. Nice artwork on Patreon website by the way. I also created my own creator page but it's not in public yet. If it wasn't for you, I wouldn't find such a interesting website to invest in. Thank you so much.
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TimMcJimFromPL Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017
Nice.
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K-E-Y-K-O Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2016
Oh god yes. :)
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
hehe :D
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:iconk-e-y-k-o:
K-E-Y-K-O Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2016
:)
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:iconfstxd:
FSTXD Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very excellent! Well done!!
It would be great if you made an fanart of Ohoho, a girl of same anime
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much.
I don't know if I'll be able to draw her too, but who knows.
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:iconfstxd:
FSTXD Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem!
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:iconpapitrooper:
PapiTrooper Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Wonderful work ! Oh and Merry Christmas my friend !
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
thank you very much, I wish a very good christmas as well :]
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PapiTrooper Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
;) (Wink) 
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ArceusWarlord22 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Why does she seem familiar? I feel like I've seen her from an anime.
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
You might have seen her from an anime called Heavy Object.
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:iconarceuswarlord22:
ArceusWarlord22 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
I might be thinking of something else, but I will definitely check that anime out.
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spiderwilliam13 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016
I feel merrier already.
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
(͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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:icondergamer:
DerGamer Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016
She looks really nice and sexy.
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much.
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:icondergamer:
DerGamer Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016
Anytime! ^_^
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TheVocaloid1 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016
Awesome and sexy :wow:
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much Huggle! 
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TheVocaloid1 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2016
Nothing to Thanks and Merry Christmas :)
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Watermelon183 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016
Great job :)
Love her.
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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AchievedOrb09 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016
Very sexy indeed. :)
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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AchievedOrb09 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016
You are welcome. :)
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:iconmullmeister:
Mullmeister Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dominate woman yes for christmas
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
(͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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trekatu Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
can i plunder the booty?
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
of course!
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trekatu Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
YARR.
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HachimakiX23 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Professional Artist
Pink Heart Icon U Pink Heart Icon 
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Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Gold Star Sticker Icon uGold Star Sticker Icon 
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AWESOMEKILLING Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice~! :D
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Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks~! :D
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Palagame Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing, totally loving it! FUHUH NOT-SO EPILEPTIC EDITION 
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much  UNDYNE STOP 
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EVOV1 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016
Great work, Blue! :)
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Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Evo :]
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Wanderer619 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016
Beautiful !
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:iconblue-senpai:
Blue-senpai Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you !
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